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Saturday, May 29, 2010

..little girl and moon..


"No dada please don't open that window",shouted his five year old daughter

"Why darling..it is suffocating here inside your room"

"No dada you don't know that round thing in the sky peeps into my room every night"

"What...oh ho that's moon darling"

"Whatever it is...he scares me every night with his different shapes"

"Nobody is scared of him..he come here every night just to take care of my sweet child"

"No..he scares me...how can he care about me"

"Don't get mad ..OK as you wish",he closed the window and left her room

Next night when she was closing her window,she saw he was not there in the sky.She wondered what happened to him.When for next two days he didn't came there.

She got curious so she went to her dada room to ask about moon and her dada told,"You have hurt him darling,he used to take care of you and you have misunderstood his love and care.. that's why he is upset with you".

Her innocent little heart felt bad.She ran to her room near the window, looked at the dark sky, closing her eyes she murmured ,"I am sorry..I have hurt you..Please come back.." and soon clouds hiding him parted away letting moonlight to fall on her.As she opened her eyes he smiled within her twinkling little eyes forever.

11 comments:

PULKIT said...

something in this says...
that its a metaphorical note...
about something... thats not fiction!
I assume here...
The moon is someone...
and
The girl child is someone...
Somewhere!

Arv said...

reminds me of those old grandma tales about the moon :)

ViDiShA said...

@Pulkit...dis is purely fiction but i like ur metaphorical note here...!!!

ViDiShA said...

@Arv...hmmm grandma tales...!!!

Priya Joyce said...

that was suchaaa cute post :))

awwwwwwwwww :))

Ajai said...

cute... the lil game that adults play on kids... :)

ViDiShA said...

@Priya Joyce....thnks dear..!!

ViDiShA said...

@AJai..ya cute games..!!

The Aspirant said...

thats such a beutiful post showing innocence of a small child.......but as tym passes dunt knw where dat innocence get disappeared....

ViDiShA said...

@The Aspirant...ya tht innocence doesn't disappear...but it hide..or we tend to hide bcoz of world..but I believe it shud always remains as it is even though we grow older..!!

Vyshu said...

hello...Really good story it is...I loved it...

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